Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Rose Street, Regina SK?

sought my twin in you
with incestuous purpose
now I lay me down

1 comment:

Blake said...

This reminds me of a poem a school-friend of mine wrote. It is one sentence, called "Planting Seeds" an I'm about to butcher it...

When I was young I planted two seeds not knowing I would carve one to bury the other.

This haiku is pretty neat though. I like how its speaker is narcissistic to the point of not only wanting to find themselves (twin) in someone else but actually goes through with sleeping with that someone else. As reader, I feel I am to assume that happened. Don't know if that was your intent (i think "incestuous" was the tip off...) but if it was, kudos!