tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post9042459789185951655..comments2023-06-02T06:20:10.239-05:00Comments on branches: Ars Poetica: An Interactive RelationshipBlakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14537430116036306583noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post-12609103187829412812010-06-17T09:18:49.891-05:002010-06-17T09:18:49.891-05:00The language here is so neat yet unrestrained. Tak...The language here is so neat yet unrestrained. Taking such sensual topics and making the reader actually know exactly what the poem is trying to say by making them feel like they know every moment.<br /><br />"Pirouette those grotto toes darling,<br />our doubt tastes<br />like chocolate covered strawberries:<br />hard sweet<br />then juice<br />dehydrating."<br /><br />!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post-65932514633797550262010-06-16T13:28:41.683-05:002010-06-16T13:28:41.683-05:00This is the best ive seen you write in a while. Th...This is the best ive seen you write in a while. The trisect of contrast between the 'skeletal chested girl', the grandfather and inebriation is great. Possibly the three breaths you fill your balloon with?Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12280555916791093185noreply@blogger.com