tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post7326354892102847263..comments2023-06-02T06:20:10.239-05:00Comments on branches: Where were the young men?Blakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14537430116036306583noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post-26734349589022742952008-04-16T21:42:00.000-05:002008-04-16T21:42:00.000-05:00I think there's a stylistic departure in this poem...I think there's a stylistic departure in this poem- most of your work seems to involve you, and be in first person, and this doesn't. That could be an inaccurate assessment. Anyhow, this piece seems like its developed your style by changing that, which I like, and I think it opens up a lot of room for exploration with your poetry. Its a solid piece.Andrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07180886770141885698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post-64456646729370958762008-04-12T22:31:00.000-05:002008-04-12T22:31:00.000-05:00"yet beautifully ephemeral about this particular p..."yet beautifully ephemeral about this particular puddle."Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14537430116036306583noreply@blogger.com