tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post4056795808253382355..comments2023-06-02T06:20:10.239-05:00Comments on branches: kicking water when nothing's a better feeling than anythingBlakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14537430116036306583noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3582026116297290073.post-3208482159397138782007-12-11T22:12:00.000-06:002007-12-11T22:12:00.000-06:00I think if you add punctuation to this poem it cou...I think if you add punctuation to this poem it could enhance the rhythm of it and maybe make some of the lines more powerful. That being said I also think each progressive post of yours I've seen has improved on your previous.Andrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07180886770141885698noreply@blogger.com